The article busy signal is about how teenagers and kids are using their technology in class inappropriately and teachers trying to prevent that from affecting their learning. I find this to be a valid point people do need to focus in school but it will get the students mad about this lack of technology. But I think that the most rational solution would be to not to allow phones during classes but still allow them anywhere in between like during lunch or breaks and if there should be someone who brings there phone to a class that's fair take it away or gives them detention they broke the rules. But if students will be using there phone in class then teach them how to use it properly and appropriately maybe start a class for coding and engineering with the apps available to smart phones and ipods .
Hi Adriana! I'm Danica. Your blog is nice and I liked how you included information from the article and from your own opinion. I think you could have worked harder to follow the success criteria. Remember to check your work for grammar, and add a link. You also need to be more descriptive and explain your opinion. Use other sources and things you find in your own life to prove your point and show others how your opinion is what makes the most sense. Read over your blog before finishing it to make sure you have everything you need and it makes sense. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteHi this is Dasha and I read your blog post. Overall I thought your blog post had a lot good options, but I have some opinions on how to make your blog post better. You were missing important information from the article to back up your opinions. You should use another source to back up your opinions and add a link. Read your blog back out loud, maybe find ways to make your blog more fluent. For example add more punctuation and check your grammar. You shouldn't start your sentences with but because it's a word that joins two thoughts, so you could use commas instead. You also didn't finish your last thought, so you should probably do that.
ReplyDeleteHi Adriana. I´m Ryan. I liked your blog but you had some spelling and grammar mistakes and you didn´t inclued evidence from another source. You also could of put more work into your blog. But other than that you had a pretty good blog. I like how you backed up your information with your own opinion.
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