Summer Memories
During the summer my parents brought me on there yearly camping trips with there friends , these people were very athletic so one day they went on a mountain hike . When walking on a trail my friends and I found a bridge a bridge that was out of order only connected by long black metal rods under it was a lake shimmering and clear lily pads ripple in sync with the water the hike was a bit dull and I was bored .My parents had always let me climb things it was fun , why swing on the monkey bars when walking over them was much more thrilling , just basic logic from when I was a kid . So I did it I chose a long stick and used it as a cane digging it in the sandy mud on the bottom with every step I took leaning on to it trying my best to not slip on the thin black steel pole . One last step I told myself I thought to myself as my foot landed on a smooth flat surface the bride set afloat in the middle of the lake looking down at the water witch I decided it was as deep as I was tall . The lake was beautiful at this angle the sun now shined brighter as I was facing its direction some leaves were yellow and red even thought it was the middle of august . I did it but I should go back I thought turning back to the pole walking slowly and carefully to the other side but this time it was harder with the pole in the opposite hand than last time then i slipped almost falling before i caught myself so i decided to go the other way that had long (thick) wooden sticks put down by a frantic dad i walked over them easily passing people offering a hand to me but i did not need it. After that we debated weather we should cross or stay we voted stay or my mom and my friends mom voted stay and the rest of us went along with it i am happy we did not cross because we would covered more ground and i was sleepy as it was.
my wish is: add some periods!!!
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my star is: you have so good quotes.
also: FIX THOSE I's
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